Cassus Animus

The 'river' is life, in that I mean water...without water we would perish. The subject is God, and questioning the existence when all that it has left is nothing. The ...

'Thee' is intentional and I know it means you, I agree the chorus has a lot of repetition and I can't quite find the words to use to put it ...

Looks a lot nicer and more organized now, easier to read this way (if someone were to listen to it, it would be a different story but as writing goes ...

Well good to see no one caught on to the meaning, as well I know my meter is mush at times and I don't tend to follow one I just ...

This is pretty solid for the intended purpose. Really I can't find anything more to say about it, aside from a very well written piece with a lot of thought ...